Hunted by the Others by
Jess Haines My rating:
3 of 5 stars I actually liked it more than I initially thought I would. The main character is not the bad-ass heroine I most like to read but she's getting better I think. In the beginning she was kind of a sorry excuse of a female lead but she started owning up to her opinions and actually grew a backbone in the last 20 pages of the book. The names of the characters though are kind of idiotic. Sara seems to be the nicest and normal one. Shiarra? Arnold? Royce? Or wait..Chaz? Serious? What kind of name is Chaz for a werewolf?
Most werewolf and vampire traits are also somewhat diluted. As a vampire, Royce falls under the manipulative and sleazy slot at the beginning and changes to almost good guy at the end. Normally authors tend to choose one category for a character, good or bad, and tend to keep it throughout the story but in this case it was most confusing because I was always expecting for Royce to jump Shia and rip out her throat. He kisses her instead...talk about mixed signals.
Chaz is...something of a poor excuse for an alpha werewolf. Apart from the whole jealousy thing he showed temporarily when he first found out about Royce's contract, he's never seen trying to control his wolf urges or actually acting alpha. I've read a lot of books with alphas and they all seem to agree an alpha is somewhat controlling, jealous and overprotective of his female. Where was this? Not that I like the whole: "You are mine" thing they all have going but...like I said, poor excuse for an alpha. Chaz seemed more like a Beta than anything else. He also had no visible problem in following Shia's orders and put her in the line of fire, or claws or whatever. How many alpha wolves would willing accept that without fighting?
Arnold was small. Insignificant. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely loved his character! As a person he was cheeky, witty, smart and totally interesting. As a magi? Not so much. All he did was cast one or two small spells around and follow Shia's orders.
The bad guys were...disappointing. All the build-up and hate for Shia and Anastasia didn't like her because Royce was thinking about changing her? Seriously? Wow. Talk about idiotic.
Overall it was interesting enough for me to finish and actually want to keep reading the series. Hope some of the main troubles get figured out in the second one though.
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