Desert Stormed by James Brock
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
The story is not bad but there is a lot of bed hopping. Usually I don't really care about that but it wasn't actually necessary to develop the story and I think it was just introduced to keep the reader motivated. Unfortunately it only frustrated me. The author also passed from a normal story to a fantastical one where nothing made sense. The writing was cramped and somewhat forced. I also noted some editing errors.
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