Mortal Enemy, Immortal Lover by Olivia Gates
My rating: 3 of 5 stars
I liked the story and even the way it was written. I didn't like finding so many grammar mistakes..I'm thinking my version was the first to be published and nobody deigned to check the writing before because it was excruciating trying to understand anything underneath all those spelling mistakes, lack of punctuation and other editing stuff. It really shouldn't have been published like this. Took me a lot of energy trying to piece stuff together. Also sex violent enough to destroy furniture? Yeah...I know they're both kind of all powerful but still...it's a bit distressing just thinking about it. A bit of info before dumping me in the action would have been nice too.
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